DOS Games Discussion

PMed you my email (the special junk box , naaaaaa)

But you know when you hit the mail button you also get our email.
But maybe some aren't valid anymore.

Not too many dirty words in your writings, I may hope, or my special pron spam filter will ditch it.

Oh. Really?

There's quite a few swears actually.

Meh. Sending anyway.

(Yeah, my "mail" thing is an email i was using about 3 years ago...)

GAMER

If it's not too much of a problem, send it to me at my DGF e-mail account. (dogbreath at dosgames dot com) You've sent me some of your stuff in the past (a play you did, I think? Or was it a dramatic reading?) and I thought it was very good.

You're a person who's able to write violently.
Pretty dark story.
I love it, really.

Thank you dosraider.

I wrote a lot of it about 4 months into my "illness" so i was less than happy at that point. Many of the violent parts you speak of were influenced by my emotions triggered by enduring school when ill. Not a fan of small children or bad teachers.

Feel free to criticise parts or ask any questions you may have. It'd really benefit the story.

GAMER

p.s. Some of you are American...does it irritate you when us Aussies spell things "wrong" ??

My grade 12 British Lit teacher was, yes, British, and she made us write papers in Standard English rather than American English. Because of this I'm now hopelessly confused, and often times accidentially use different spellings interchangably. (color/colour, and aluminum/aluminium are my most frequent)

So the spelling doesn't bother me, but sometimes Australian colloquialisms are funny.

GAMER wrote:Feel free to criticise parts or ask any questions you may have. It'd really benefit the story.

I already said I found it good.
I've slimed enough.



Was a real good story, really.
And a nice read, thanks.

'Twas good! Anticlimatic but good


<strike>PS: Dogbreath: You're an ass!</strike>

Gamer doesn't do sleep and gets 8 hours of drugs.

click the horizontal line to seperate it... i believe the horizontal line is a page break.

so, click it and it will magicay show the gap between the pages like it should oO.

edit, just click before it and press delete away it goes... or it does in office XP with the latest updates.


Franpa, phpBB forums have a nifty feature called an "edit button"! Use it wisely! - Larry

Dogbreath wrote:Gamer doesn't do sleep and gets 8 hours of drugs.

Eh??

I'm about 3 chapters off finishing it now.

GAMER

Curious me, swirl it in my mail when finished please.

It isn't your email anyway is it?

Didn't you give me Larry's email?

I remember someone giving me Larry's email...and i'm pretty sure it wasn't Larry.

Meh. After next Wednesday i'll be posting the full completed version here.

GAMER

Dogbreath wrote:Gamer doesn't do sleep and gets 8 hours of drugs.

Indeed.

It was you? Bastard!

Now I shall kill you!

*gruesomely rips wardrich's head apart*

Ok, so, who wants ice cream?

What a nuthouse.

No wonder she writes crazy stories.
lmao.


Did someone mentioned ice cream?

Why is i a nuthouse?

I'm not the one giving out Larry's email...

I could have sworn it wasn't Wardrich... Hmm. Meh.

Should be finished tonight. EEK.

GAMER

Forum@Dosgames*com=nuthouse.

And you got MY email from me, not Larry's, don't even know his, AND DON'T WANNA KNOW IT.

Looking forward to your story ........ It'd better be as good as the first one I got, or you're gonna live with the chikeds in teh snow.

We came to the conclusion that it was actually Wardrich that gave me Larry's email.

I'm about 1000 words off finishing. The whole thing will be up next Thursday night.

GAMER