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The Descent
Posted: Fri Oct 22, 2004 4:57 pm
by Mauntgomery
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Posted: Fri Oct 22, 2004 4:59 pm
by Mauntgomery
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Posted: Fri Oct 22, 2004 4:59 pm
by Mauntgomery
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Posted: Fri Oct 22, 2004 7:08 pm
by Kazer0
That's all I read when I skimmed, and noticed you made a common over-word use error. Try synonyms for man, or even give them names even if they aren't main characters.
Posted: Sat Oct 23, 2004 2:12 pm
by Mauntgomery
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Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 11:10 pm
by Da_Goat
Psst...if you want to publish this, I'd be hesitant about posting a whole chapter on the internet. Generally, posting on the internet is seen as a form of publishing, and most companies aren't willing to publish a book - in full or in part - that's been published elsewhere. Most sites and publishers stick to a rule of 13 lines posted, and the rest read via email.
But it's your story, so do what you want.