Uhhh. Help. [WORD FOR DUMMIES]

Post by **dosraider** » Thu Aug 09, 2007 3:27 am

PMed you my email (the special junk box , naaaaaa)

But you know when you hit the mail button you also get our email.
But maybe some aren't valid anymore.

Not too many dirty words in your writings, I may hope, or my special pron spam filter will ditch it.

GAMER · Post by **GAMER** » Thu Aug 09, 2007 4:16 am

Oh. Really?

There's quite a few swears actually.

Meh. Sending anyway.

(Yeah, my "mail" thing is an email i was using about 3 years ago...)

GAMER

Post by **Dogbreath** » Thu Aug 09, 2007 8:56 am

If it's not too much of a problem, send it to me at my DGF e-mail account. (dogbreath at dosgames dot com) You've sent me some of your stuff in the past (a play you did, I think? Or was it a dramatic reading?) and I thought it was very good.

Post by **dosraider** » Thu Aug 09, 2007 2:06 pm

You're a person who's able to write violently.
Pretty dark story.
I love it, really.

GAMER · Post by **GAMER** » Thu Aug 09, 2007 7:52 pm

Thank you dosraider.

I wrote a lot of it about 4 months into my "illness" so i was less than happy at that point. Many of the violent parts you speak of were influenced by my emotions triggered by enduring school when ill. Not a fan of small children or bad teachers.

Feel free to criticise parts or ask any questions you may have. It'd really benefit the story.

GAMER

p.s. Some of you are American...does it irritate you when us Aussies spell things "wrong" ??

Post by **Dogbreath** » Fri Aug 10, 2007 9:21 am

My grade 12 British Lit teacher was, yes, British, and she made us write papers in Standard English rather than American English. Because of this I'm now hopelessly confused, and often times accidentially use different spellings interchangably. (color/colour, and aluminum/aluminium are my most frequent)

So the spelling doesn't bother me, but sometimes Australian colloquialisms are funny.

Post by **dosraider** » Fri Aug 10, 2007 3:25 pm

GAMER wrote:Feel free to criticise parts or ask any questions you may have. It'd really benefit the story.

I already said I found it good.
I've slimed enough.

Was a real good story, really.
And a nice read, thanks.

Post by **Larry Laffer** » Tue Aug 14, 2007 9:38 am

'Twas good! Anticlimatic but good

<strike>PS: Dogbreath: You're an ass!</strike>

Post by **Dogbreath** » Tue Aug 14, 2007 9:50 am

Gamer doesn't do sleep and gets 8 hours of drugs.

franpa · Post by **franpa** » Tue Aug 14, 2007 10:52 am

click the horizontal line to seperate it... i believe the horizontal line is a page break.

so, click it and it will magicay show the gap between the pages like it should oO.

edit, just click before it and press delete

away it goes... or it does in office XP with the latest updates.

Franpa, phpBB forums have a nifty feature called an "edit button"! Use it wisely! - Larry

GAMER · Post by **GAMER** » Tue Aug 14, 2007 10:29 pm

Dogbreath wrote:Gamer doesn't do sleep and gets 8 hours of drugs.

Eh??

I'm about 3 chapters off finishing it now.

GAMER

Post by **dosraider** » Wed Aug 15, 2007 7:16 am

Curious me, swirl it in my mail when finished please.

GAMER · Post by **GAMER** » Wed Aug 15, 2007 8:57 am

It isn't your email anyway is it?

Didn't you give me Larry's email?

I remember someone giving me Larry's email...and i'm pretty sure it wasn't Larry.

Meh. After next Wednesday i'll be posting the full completed version here.

GAMER

Post by **dosraider** » Wed Aug 15, 2007 9:02 am

Dogbreath wrote:Gamer doesn't do sleep and gets 8 hours of drugs.

Indeed.

Post by **wardrich** » Wed Aug 15, 2007 2:26 pm

GAMER wrote:I remember someone giving me Larry's email...and i'm pretty sure it wasn't Larry.

Post by **Larry Laffer** » Wed Aug 15, 2007 2:32 pm

It was you? Bastard!

Now I shall kill you!

*gruesomely rips wardrich's head apart*

Ok, so, who wants ice cream?

Post by **dosraider** » Wed Aug 15, 2007 3:41 pm

What a nuthouse.

No wonder she writes crazy stories.
lmao.

Did someone mentioned ice cream?

GAMER · Post by **GAMER** » Thu Aug 16, 2007 12:40 am

Why is i a nuthouse?

I'm not the one giving out Larry's email...

I could have sworn it wasn't Wardrich... Hmm. Meh.

Should be finished tonight. EEK.

GAMER

Post by **dosraider** » Thu Aug 16, 2007 4:31 am

Forum@Dosgames*com=nuthouse.

And you got MY email from me, not Larry's, don't even know his, AND DON'T WANNA KNOW IT.

Looking forward to your story ........ It'd better be as good as the first one I got, or you're gonna live with the chikeds in teh snow.

GAMER · Post by **GAMER** » Thu Aug 16, 2007 5:17 am

We came to the conclusion that it was actually Wardrich that gave me Larry's email.

I'm about 1000 words off finishing. The whole thing will be up next Thursday night.

GAMER